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Friday, September 4, 2020

Our dadwaver story

 For writing at school, we had to create our own dadwaver. This is the story that I came up with.


As I watch the contestant right next to me makes me soo nurse as the bike's mighty  roar makes a scene in my head and the high-pitched skids they do makes me think it’s all a dream. They all try to bump each other off their bikes to get a head start. “ Good luck to you ‘cause you gonna need it,” I hear from the proud contestant. The light dirty sand gets into one of my eyes and it starts to sting. One of the racers got bumped off their bike. She took 5 deep breaths and then rode down the lumpy hill as fast as she could. Racing down the lumpy hill makes me faster and faster as I ride in front of everyone The blazing sun shines upon us and makes us more and more sweaty.Why do people hate? I race down like a speeding bullet and come first place.


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