For writing me and my group had to write a piece of writing about someones emotions but not say the jail word. I choose to do a writing about a all black that just scored a goal. This is what I came up with.
The all black dashes towards the try line & scores! All of his team mates come running towards him to give him high-5's and huges. They all stand in a wonky line and start to do the floss. As they were doing the floss, smiles poped onto everyone's face. The all black felt all these emotions rushing up him as if he had just climbed to the top of mount cook.
Can you guess how he fells?
Go and try make your own show not tell.
