The Big, Happy bear, and it's fluffy brown hair
Waving its hand and giving a great loud cheer!
He eats a lot of honey that goes in his big, chubby tummy!
soft as a marshmallow and kind as a heart.
His jokes are funny and he really is smart.
Goodbye big, happy bear and take care.
Kia Kaha!
Created by Azryel
Oh look at that big happy bear in the window, I'm sure he has made others smile when they see him. I like how you found words that rhyme like- hair and cheer, and heart and smart. Thanks for sharing your poem Azzy .
ReplyDeleteFabulous poem Azzy. You show a good understanding about how to use rhyming words effectively. Do you have any more poems you could publish?
ReplyDeleteOh Wow Azzy - your poem made me smile!! What a wonderful description of your teddy bear - I feel I understand him well just by the descriptive words and phrases you have used.
ReplyDeleteGood job Azzy! Love it!
ReplyDeleteGreat poem Azzy. I love the line about eating honey in his chubby tummy, it reminds me of Winnie the Pooh!
ReplyDeleteGood job Azzy i like how you used rhyming words i Love it!!
ReplyDeleteAzzy that was amazing I love when you did you do similes
ReplyDeleteI love to read it.
Sitia, did you see my friend post? I would love it if you could see it.
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